Laughing.

I can't stpo laughing.

 

There's tears in my eyes.

 

I can't stop laughing

 

my sides are getting sore

 

I can't stop laughing

 

the feeling it's contageous

 

I can't stop laughing

 

It's taken over me.

 

I can't stop giggling

 

I'd be frightful just to see

 

I can't stop my chuckle

 

It's not up to me

 

I can't stop my cackling

 

I'm acting like a Clown.

 

I can't stop laughing

 

I'm falling towards the ground.

 

My sides are Aching

 

or so it appears.

 

It's contagious

 

It's outrageous

 

and i can't stop.

 

I just can't stop.

 

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Very nice write, funny how this is so true.
I like this part, I know i feel like this with laughter:
"I can't stop laughing

my sides are getting sore

I can't stop laughing

the feeling it's contageous"

Also a correction in this part: contagious.
As well as the first line in the poem, stop "I can't stpo laughing."

[Reaper]

Nice poem. It's sometimes hard to make a successful happy poem, but this one is very good.

[Raven Starhawk]

Certainly is uplifting and good for a short read.

[SOUL LESS]

Okay...this is good for a laugh :) Had me smiling by the end...the vocab is nice.

[SuicidePact.]

stop*