I see

I see

A Poem by SuicidePact.

I look at you

i see truth

I look at you

I see wisdom

I look at you

I see innocence

I look at you

I see love

I look at you

I see forgiveness
I look at you

I see change

i look at you

I see happiness

i see truth

i see peace

i look at you

i see him.

© 2012 SuicidePact.


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Beauty. Simple. To the point. Short, yet speaks a lot. I love that last line: "i see him".

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

YOU'RE LOOKING AT ME?! WHERE ARE YOU?!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Great poem. I liked the sort of twist ending.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Another Awesome write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


wonderful poem i enjoyed reading it thanks for sharing this good job

Posted 12 Years Ago


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hmm
This is wonderful, i enjoyed this

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very nice. This is great.

Posted 12 Years Ago


right but what about me? heh

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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