I see

I look at you

i see truth

I look at you

I see wisdom

I look at you

I see innocence

I look at you

I see love

I look at you

I see forgiveness
I look at you

I see change

i look at you

I see happiness

i see truth

i see peace

i look at you

i see him.

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Beauty. Simple. To the point. Short, yet speaks a lot. I love that last line: "i see him".

[Lowesy]

YOU'RE LOOKING AT ME?! WHERE ARE YOU?!

[maddie]

Great poem. I liked the sort of twist ending.

[Jordan's Back]

Another Awesome write!

[jennifer little]

wonderful poem i enjoyed reading it thanks for sharing this good job

[hmm]

This is wonderful, i enjoyed this

[Alex Vidmar]

Very nice. This is great.

[That_Guy]

right but what about me? heh