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I laugh, you smile.

I cry, you cry

I try, you try

I fall, you stand

I hope, you dream

I dream, you wish

I wish, you dream

I believe, you acheive

I acheive, you believe

I kiss, you hug

I hug, you kiss

I play, you play

I love you loved

I trust,you trust

I forgive, you forget

I smile,  you frown.

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Dr. S. D. Blankenship D..]

Hm, I like this. It's Powerful.

~S. D. Blankenship

[Jock Engelman]

wow i was very very misled by the title, i was not to sure about what this poem was going to be about, but i still love how this work flows off the tongue so freely

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Haha, really nice, fun with the words in this and yet it speaks in it's own way, a good way. I think this deserves a title. :)

[Edgar Allan Poe's Daugh..]

Wow, this is so cool! I love the way it flows. Nice job. =D

[5minutesofcrazy]

I like your style. Thank you.

[Abram Walker]

I'm still there.

[That_Guy]

Been there