My friend

The smile I see when you look at me,

Danger is always on your mind.

Those Eyes, I feel watching me

Whenever I close my eyes.

Laughing, crying

Always together hugging the pain away

Although I wont see you again

I know you’ll always be my friend.

Reviews

[Jock Engelman]

i love the following set of lines:
"Always together hugging the pain away
Although I wont see you again
I know you’ll always be my friend."
they make my heart melt and bleed at the same moment

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Really nice.
I like this part here:
"Those Eyes, I feel watching me
Whenever I close my eyes."
As well as the last two lines in the end.

[Reaper]

good poem :D

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

You should continue to write, this is beautiful!!!! Quite an image of a good friend, although it almost sounds as if they were more than a friend to you.

[hmm]

I really enjoyed this write, This is amazing!
Keep on writing.

[Mark D]

You should definitely keep writing! I enjoyed this a lot