Blue eyed boy

 

Smile, blue eyes, blonde hair

Love at first sight,

Laughter energized  always happy

 

Until you gave me a fright

Sickness, screaming, crying

Don’t leave me all alone

I need you

Bring back my happiness

 

The sun will shine brighter once I know that you are well

As I hear the news of your recovery

Rejoicing in my mind

I love you blue eyed boy.

Your smile has finally returned

Your blue eyes sparkle once more.

Reviews

[AK]

Very nice poem! I could feel the fear in the middle... You may want to place a comma after 'I love you' in the line 'I love you blue eyed boy'. Great write!

[Jock Engelman]

"Until you gave me a fright
Sickness, screaming, crying
Don’t leave me all alone
I need you
Bring back my happiness"

this is interesting because it is extremely emotive, but it then ends with a happy ending. :)

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Like a happy ending that follows after sadness... nice.

[quarintine_deathangel]

That so sweet :)

[Amila Jay]

Hm About someone special I guess ;) Nice write:))