Jim.

Jim.

A Poem by SuicidePact.

There once was a man called, Jim

Who fell for a girl named Kim,

They were in love,

And they had a Bub.

Who wasn’t much cuter then Him.

© 2012 SuicidePact.


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i like the use of the rhyming couplet at the beginning and how the last like fits in with the first two. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Cute rhyming. Nice.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Chuckling here...

Posted 12 Years Ago



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