Through a different pair of eyes

Through a different pair of eyes

A Poem by SuicidePact.

I can’t find the exact words to describe how i feel bout you

I’ll start anyway…

Your eyes, that makes my heart cry

There’s something tellin me maybe you could be the one for me

Your fragile yet strong Your my super girl

Stop pulling yourself down

Your beautiful the way you are don’t try to make yourself better

Stand up tall; I’ll catch you if you fall

Sometimes I feel as if I’ve known you all my life I wanna get to know you

Theres no words to explain the way you make me feel

Now I've found, who I am and it’s your fault.

You’re the best thing I’ve ever had happen to me

© 2012 SuicidePact.


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Very sweet... really nice expressed feelings put into these lines in this poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Been there, so been there.

Posted 12 Years Ago


sorry I'll edit the you're/your later, i can't believe i was so stupid as to miss that.

Posted 12 Years Ago


this is a gorgeous poem, very very nice write

Posted 12 Years Ago


Mirrors never lie... its our eyes as we remember what we want to see ...within.

As a note:

Your - when its something belonging to a person

You're - shortened "you are" - otherwise

Posted 12 Years Ago


Thannnnnnnnks you two xox

Posted 12 Years Ago


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this is beautiful...

Posted 12 Years Ago


naww thats so sweet ur heart is so pure and it shines so bright, just like the light from ur halo :D

Posted 12 Years Ago



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SuicidePact.
SuicidePact.

Not telling!, SecretVille., Australia



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