- Love -

Love is Patient, love is kind.

Love is surely hard to find. 

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Love doesn't envy, nor does it boast,

Love will not involve arrogance, for it's not desired by most.

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Love has not jealousy, it has not envy. 

Love holds the keys to everything that can be.

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Love is not just a feeling, love can be a drug, 

It make you fall for a sinner, or a thug. 

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Love can be funny, love can be strange, 

Love can cause us to make a positive change. 

Reviews

[Richy Moon]

:) Nice poem! Lovenly worded, short and sweet!

[Sourodip]

Simple, honest and beautiful.

[Damien Davison]

It was alright, I enjoyed the lines
'Love has not jealousy, it has not envy. Love holds the keys to everything that can be.'
flowed nicely there.

[patricia]

I liked the stanza Love is not just a feeling, love can be a drug
It makes you fall for a sinner, or a thug.

Love is blind. Thanks.

[reflectingus]

This poem, though written in simple words, has a deeper meaning. It made me think about what love really is. What you have here is the truth, love does have it's ups and downs, though I feel as if you focused more on the ups here. I like it.

[Raven Starhawk]

So much wisdom in this. It holds beauty really to a new level. I also think it teaches something. Some people think love is supposed to be...idk...I guess flawless and maybe in some way it is, but people tend to be flawed themselves and that is why love can be complicated, but enough of my insane rambling. This was well penned.

[Barbara Walker]

Really enjoyed this and it all rings true! Like the way you formatted it, too.

[Dream Weaver]

Just the rhyming alone hooked me, very well done!

[Rusty]

Nicely done. I like the message very much.

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Wow, you made some great points on the true meaning of the simple but powerful word "love". It tugged my heart and grasped the words. Love is hard to find nowadays, for the young folks anyways. Too much cheating and portrayal going on to know if any of it is forreal anymore. I hate the results on love sometimes. For me, it's mostly heartache and million of tears shedded. There has been times when my stomach folded into one big knot with butterflies. I felt so in love before that I felt like I was going to throw up. Love was a positive change for me with one guy I used to date for sure. He made me realize that I don't have to change, because I'm special how I am now. Great job, this poem definitely should've opened people's eyes globally on the true meaning of love!! :)

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)