The Girl who sat in front of me.

The Girl who sat in front of me.

A Poem by SuicidePact.

Your personality did a total 180 you stupid b***h.

I’ve never really been one to snitch,

But you’ve left me broke, left me alone.

And gone a turned into a stupid clone

Your body is a temple not a free for all

Sooner or later you’re gonna fall.

I don’t understand it I want to scream

It’s not really happening it’s all a bad dream!

I hate who you are, who you’ve become.

I hate that dress doesn’t cover your bum

What the hell happened?

When we came to an end…

You used to be different,

We were the best of friends

Now I don’t even know who you are

© 2012 SuicidePact.


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Very A+B, but still quite an enjoyable piece.

Zacky D.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I can feel the emotion coming from this poem. A lot of anger, the voice feels betrayed...

Posted 12 Years Ago


sadly i can relate to this poem ...well done

Posted 12 Years Ago


You seem to have fallen out with your former friend....
I like this because you make me believe every line, this is real anger.

Posted 12 Years Ago


SuicidePact.

12 Years Ago

Thank you for reading means alot to me :)
That was so great.. I lived the rhyme in this..
And yeah same words i can send to someone .. So i can relate wwll to this..
Well done

Posted 12 Years Ago


SuicidePact.

12 Years Ago

Thankyou :)
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stars are far

12 Years Ago

you are welcome :)
All part of life. Only make you stronger

Posted 12 Years Ago


Aawh sorry this happened to you! If you ever need someone to talk to we're here for you ;) This is straight to the point with real emotion. You're an amaizing writer! You just can't help stupid sometimes. True friends will find them self and come back to real freinds as soon as their run gets old. Others however will ride the wind to wherever it takes them and listen to society. Goodluck with getting real forever friends who know themselves and the idiocy of plastics and fakes. Thanks for the write. ^.

Posted 12 Years Ago


SuicidePact.

12 Years Ago

Oh thankyou and yeah I find great inspiration in this whole friendship to use in my writing so in a .. read more
quarintine_deathangel

12 Years Ago

Glad you could find a bright side. ^.^
Ouch! The frustrations that can reach the heart as another changes not with us but in an entirely different direction. It happens, sad but true. Just always remain being you and sometimes the other will come back with positive growth after all. We all mature and change at different paces, so patience is needed especially if the friendship is a treasured one. Nicely expressed.

Posted 12 Years Ago


SuicidePact.

12 Years Ago

Thankyou :)
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wow this is seriously how im feeling right now! AMAZING poem! im a huge fan of your writing! great job!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


SuicidePact.

12 Years Ago

Thanks! and I am sorry that you are going through soemthing similar!
I think we all unfortunately know someone like this

Posted 12 Years Ago


SuicidePact.

12 Years Ago

Or at least the type.

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