The Girl who sat in front of me.

Your personality did a total 180 you stupid b***h.

I’ve never really been one to snitch,

But you’ve left me broke, left me alone.

And gone a turned into a stupid clone

Your body is a temple not a free for all

Sooner or later you’re gonna fall.

I don’t understand it I want to scream

It’s not really happening it’s all a bad dream!

I hate who you are, who you’ve become.

I hate that dress doesn’t cover your bum

What the hell happened?

When we came to an end…

You used to be different,

We were the best of friends

Now I don’t even know who you are

Reviews

[redflutterby]

This really took me back to my middle school days. People would just change over night and you would wonder what the hell happened. It was almost like one of those horror movies where some alien seed has invaded their bodies. And the worst part was the way that person would snub you as if u meant nothing. You expressed this well with biting sarcasm. Good job!!!

[trainwreck]

This feeling is wayyy too familiar.

[Richy Moon]

I know the feeling. When the hormones hit you really find out the ugly truths about people, If they are loyal, caring or even respectful towards you, and this peom captures that entirely. Great poem, definitly a new favorite.

[Patrick Henry]

She take your boyfriend or sleep around and embarrass you when she started to ignore you? This "B***h" got it good in this poem!! lol Maybe she'll lose her head one day, blowing some John in the backseat of his pickup truck for $5, when a tractor trailer takes the whole thing out in a freak accident! lol I'm kidding of course. I like all your poems. They sound like excerpts from a diary you want to burn, but at least you're getting it out and finding others who sympathize with them, too. : ) xoxo -Mark

[StevieTheAussie]

Very genuine. I can really feel the emotion through your words and I hope you continue to write more.

[judith106]

I can relate to this and like it...Never conform to what society thinks is the norm. Even if the people you think you know best decide to do just that...

[Miss Alicia]

This seemed a little unfinished to me, but otherwise a good poem.

[The Doctor]

I'd have to speculate that you're angry. Just a guess lol. But I give you credit for letting it out your feelings. In pieces like this you are very good at filling the reader with your emotion on the way you construct the poem. I also like the classic poem style (rhyming at the end, structure, etc). Keep up the good work. -The doctor

[Lumière Dé..]

I know this is a poem about you going through the realisation of how your closest friend has become a different person, I can definitly feel that but I must say, this poem made me laugh and I think that's a good thing. I've gone through the same thing and it hurts but it's a good thing to keep laughter in your life, even through the darkest of times. Well done :)

[mariah]

like drago said, i can feel the emotion in this poem. this was definatly written from the heart. nicely done :)
-mariah