A blaze.

Dancing  tongues,

Licking lips,

T’was

The most perfect kiss.

Holding hands,

Songs

 by our favourite band.

Hearts pacing,

Hormones racing,

People screaming

Smiles were gleaming.

I held you close

The air spelt of smoke.

The fire blazed,

And the crowd were crazed

I kissed you one last time

Before we both started to run

I thought I lost you,

Didn’t know what to do

You could see me

But I couldn’t see you

My lungs filled with air

My life I had to bear

It gave me a scare.

I closed my eyes one last time

As God took me away

And that my dear

 was my very last day

Author's Note

Haven't written a poem in a while, it's probably not that great just wanted to see if I could still do it!

Reviews

[Richy Moon]

Intimate and appropriate. It is a gppd peom that's going into my library for sure! Keep on writing!

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

Are you kidding? It's awesome!!! Nice job!

[Dayran]

An experience that may de divined only in the experience of a god. It could be why so many people these days attempt a discernment of god's purpose.

[Pax]

yup, you still have it, its nicely express of being a fan.

[The Watcher]

Really emotional and well written. I'd say you haven't lost your touch to writing poems. Kudos to you