Life as a Game

This is a short poem that has a true meaning to life. So, go ahead and take a look.

Life is like a chain, 

one section lain, and you will be slain.

You live life like a game,

when you win, there will be fame.

When you lose, there is pain.

Wonders came, but then you broke the chain.

Life seemed to go down the drain,

all your friends think you’re lame,

Slowly fading away your name.

There’s no one else to blame, for the awful reign.

There’s no gain, unless you wash off all the ashame.

So try to live life like a picture frame. 

Take yourself out and examine your aim. 

Change your attitude and prove the perfect acclaim. 

Capture your life and reach out and reclaim. 

Now, see if you end up the same.

Author's Note

Watcha think? Why don't you tell me in a review! Thanks.

Reviews

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

This one I feel allot of people could relate to.
I like the way you have written it out, all the same word rhyming but with this line:
So try to live life like a dream,
Its the only line that didn't match the rest, puts the poem kinda out of place, maybe make that rhyme to.
Besides that I liked this one to :)
Well done :)

[Jadon96]

I'm trying to think of something with "picture frame" instead of "dream," any suggestions?

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Hmmm nothing's coming to me, but you could try something with Blame to :)

[Jadon96]

I was thinking: "So try to live life like a picture frame. Take yourself out and examine your aim. Change your attitude and prove the perfect acclaim. Capture your life and reach out and reclaim. Now, see if you end up the same."

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thats brilliant! Gosh your talented haha!
Making me jealous with your rhyming skills.
You are NOT alowed to be better than me!

[Jadon96]

I'm an amateur though XD

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

You are far from it lol.
Amateur my a*s.
You have some real talent :)

[Jadon96]

I have read poetry, and mine is amateur haha. But, I'm only a beginner XD

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Well I think your is great :)

[Jadon96]

Thanks! You are a good poet too!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thank you )

[Jadon96]

You are welcome! But hey, I'll catch up with you maybe tomorrow? Hopefully. See ya

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Yer see ya :) Have a good day at school. Tell the haters to go suck a.... yer maybe not :P

[Jadon96]

Haha, I enjoy my classes though, so it won't be too bad

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thats good than :)