Barbecue

Wrote this whilst taking a walk and happened upon a familiar smell.

Afternoon breeze

Carries smells of barbecue

Summers scent

Reviews

[Dean Kuch®]

I could almost TASTE it! Oh, such a sweet, sweet aroma!

[Jaden Larker]

Thanks, your comment helped me improve this!

[Dean Kuch®]

Glad I could help. I really liked it just as it was written though...

[Jaden Larker]

Hmm, I'm not sure at the moment. Think I'll change it back for now and give it some thought.