Flash Flood

Flash Flood

A Poem by Jaden Larker
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Wrote this on the day of the flash flood when considering all the kingfisher nests that would have been swept away.

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Inch by inch

Water level rises

Kingfisher mourns

© 2012 Jaden Larker


Author's Note

Jaden Larker
As with all my haiku, it still needs to be revised as I'm still very new to the genre.

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I like it as it is. It's succinct and none of the words are wasted. Nice!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Jaden Larker
Jaden Larker

West Midlands, United Kingdom



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