The Wind
A Poem by Jaden Larker
Wind pushes dark-
Clouds, to reveal
Hidden blue sky
© 2012 Jaden Larker
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terse verse at it's best
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
Thank you for your comment, but I was curious as to how this could be considered a terse verse? To b.. read moreThank you for your comment, but I was curious as to how this could be considered a terse verse? To be honest I wasn't even aware of the concept until your comment ahah.
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12 Years Ago
Haiku follow a distinct form 5-7-5 this does not quite meet those rules but neverthe less it is a we.. read moreHaiku follow a distinct form 5-7-5 this does not quite meet those rules but neverthe less it is a well comceived poem
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12 Years Ago
Ahh, that would be because I follow in the steps of haiku poets that don't count syllables. There ar.. read moreAhh, that would be because I follow in the steps of haiku poets that don't count syllables. There are a number of famous ones, like them I feel it constricting and unnecessary.
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12 Years Ago
I guess I am just an old fashioned traditionalist
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Jaden LarkerWest Midlands, United Kingdom
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I am a Poet from a small town you've never heard of. Here I will share my haiku, senryu, tanka & more traditional poetry.
NOTE: It is a widely viewed misconception that haiku must follow the format.. more..
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