YOUR LOVE

love poem

Your Love

tenderly you reach out to touch

with a look I reveal too much

I am in love with you now

but by getting there

I couldn't know how

a tickle, a whisper

of love there to share

I couldn't help 

wanting and needing

to bare 

my soul to you

my heart through you

ever so sweet

your love has become my endless

retreat

©2004 Mysty Johnson

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

One of my fav. poetry!

Seemed to be written with full warmth of pleasure one renders to possessive heart. Kinda like the way you've painted your velvety feelings on caramels words. Interesting reading... with proper beats of rhyme. Would be looking forward to reading you!

[SquinklaPsyOps]

The love you have put within your piece. You have done extremely!

As your mind was thinking you were whispering to yourself and only you could hear what you were saying, that happens when a person needs reasurement , that signifies you were trying to convince your self because the other person did not fullfilled all the qualities for you just to close your eyes and be taken by the moment.

Thank you for sharing! May the stars shine brightly upon you now and forever!