Chapter Four---Treason's POV

Chapter Four---Treason's POV

A Chapter by +*ANA*+

Treason woke at sunrise, looking over to see Azrial letting a log light for a new fire. Haven had arrived and was explaining our plan to take Himmel over. It'd be hard, having to overcome Anne. Treason stood from his muddy 'bed' of leaves stuffed into a huge pillow case. Angels got a mansion...Demon's got a forest. He began to walk out towards the border of Himmel to see if he could find Esther again.
"Where are you going?" Azrial spit out angrily as he walked her quietly. She never left a thing unnoticed when it came to her older brother.
He didn't even look back to answer: "A walk." is all he said as he took the Burrow path, which led to the end of the forest. Right in between the borders of Himmel and Vinci there was a small park overgrown with black roses and lingering vines that grew over the tables, benches, and swingsets. He tried to expand his aura, to get Esther to recognize his signal automatically. He waited for 16 forlorn minutes as she had made her way slowly into the park.
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When she arrived, she had Commandments in hand, ready for battle. Her eyes where fierce, angry, and cold. He could feel her rummage through his mind, searching for an unknown answer.
"Do you have her or not?" She asked crudely, pointing the sharp blade at his human heart. One prick from that sword and he'd be back into the Underworld for another hundred years.
Treason flinched and backed away slowly. "Who?"
"Cambria! She's a six year old girl who was attacked by your league of demons!" Esther yelled stepping toward him again. 
Treason stepped toward her in pure horror, slipping his hand into her platinum blonde hair.
"They attacked a six year old girl?" He asked in a whisper, his face showing nothing but concern.
Esther threw her sword under Treason's chin harshly and pulled away from him.
"Don't you DARE pretend you didn't know!!"
"I didn't! I swear to God!" He screamed back. The words sunk in deep, there blood boiling. Then, Esther looked at him in suck shock....Her eyes showed how she expecting him to...burn? Eager flames consuming him, pulling him back into the depths of the Hell.
Then he realized what he did wrong. Treason covered his mouth and widened his eyes, He knew the rules. He would be whisked away, for putting any faith in God at all. That equaled up to fifty years in Limbo. Yet...He was still here. He was STILL here? His hand slid out to Esther, pulling her in for a caress.
"Why aren't you gone?" Esther whispered, squirming away from his hold on her.
He shrugged "I don't...I don't know. I don't understand. I thought it was you."
"Why would I save you?" She spat as she broke from his hold.
She pursed her perfect pink lips and chuckled to herself "Are you even a demon, Treason?"
"Yes! I think...I've aways been different. Rules bend with me."
Esther frowned at this. She was probably hoping he was one of the possessed. She then drew the sword from her sheaf about three minutes after, setting the blades edge on Treason's throat. 
"Do you swear that you had nothing to do with Cambria being taken?" She whispered to him.
Treason answered with a slight nod of his head, and just like that, Esther was gone.


© 2011 +*ANA*+


Author's Note

+*ANA*+
>:D
Again-- Amanda writes Esther's POV
Naomi(me) writes Treason's POV
and Abbi's gonna write Azrial's POV :P

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no !!! ok i loved it!

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Wow again. Love it.

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I like the action and movement of the chapter. You are create a interesting and very strong story. Try to make each scene longer with strong in description. I look forward to see where the story is heading.
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