Chapter Three---Esther's POV

Esther sat on the railing of her stone balconey staring at the forest scenery, a cave burried deep in the woods shone a orange firey glaze. The light wind made her long light brown hair fly softly around her. She was alone, but she didn't want to be alone, she wanted to be with the mysterious man named Treason. Who was he? How can his aura be exactly the same as John's, yet not be him? He even admitted that it wasn't him. So why was she not convinced? She closed her eyes to search for his aura, maybe, just maybe, he'd be out of Vinci, the demon's hideout. 

She searched for ten minutes straight but came up empty and unable to grasp the location of his aura. He was somewhere close though, that much she knew. She knew the fire she saw meant trouble because it gave an un-earthly pressance. But at the same time it was warm, and welcoming. She was forbidden to go into the woods, because that was demon territory,
Vinci was off limits to Angels, while the demons where forbidden anywhere near Himmel, the place the Angel's called home on Earth.
She started inching off the vine wrapped rails, she wanted to go to to the orange light. Climbing off the balcony was a good way to get away unnoticed.
"Esther! How dare you!?" Her sister Memories screamed at her from behind.
She jumped and gasped in shock of being seen.
"Memories! I didn't know you where there!"
"How dare you think of defying God!"
"I wasn't, I just...the light...theres something about it...."
Her sister walked toward her with a hurt and confused violet gaze, her long black hair flowed behind her.
"You know better. Stay away Esther. Thats your warning. Do you want to be one of the Fallen? One of those lost souls? Like Navaeh? Just because of temptation?"
"No! Of course not. You know that." She said standing.
"Do I, Esther? How do I know that you won't defy God? How can you prove that to me?"
"My loyalty lies in God! Memories you know that!" She yelled back.
Memories clucked her tongue at Esther.
"Tread lightly sister. The Fallen are a broken race."
She vanished at that last spoken word. Esther's mouth fell open in shock. Was she really about to defy Him for that ever so familiar stranger? He was dangerous. She closed her mouth and turned around to see the light had disappeared. She sighed and Nevaeh's face came to mind. Her beautiful pixie style blonde hair was spiked, her smiley green eyes shined, her perfect smile completed her angelic look. She had always been very close with Navaeh, they where best friends in all sense of the manner. Until she was ordered to vanquish her father, who was a sinner in all meanings of the word. But she couldn't, so she had been banished from Himmel. Esther missed her
every day, haveing to fight her on occasions. 

"She is evil now Esther. She isn't the same as she was here. Neveah is no longer Neveah", Mark's words still to this day echoed in her head.
She sighed and sat against the white stone collumn, she heard a light flapping in her ear, She turned her head at the foreign noise to see the grass fairy Herb.
"Oh, hello Herb."
"Esther! Come quick! Theres demons attacking Cambria!"

Author's Note

((Cambria is a little girl angel))

Reviews

[brenda]

ok the ending scared me and i really want to know whats gonna happen next !

[Coyote Poetry]

The tale is getting stronger. I like the conversation in the story. Making the character come alive and strong. A very good ending. Always good to have a open ending. Keep the reader attention.
Coyote