Jade's Personality Transplant

Three months ago,

i stepped out of my shadows.

Released the true me,

ended up feeling trapped instead of free.

 

I thought I'd found the path to follow

Turns out it lead to a fatal dead end.

Now im trying to turn around and start again.

 

See Jades having bad days.

Im receiving letters begging me to die.

I dont know why,

but these death threats are starting to offend.

 

I dont know the ones who want me dead

Nor do I believe I've done anything to hurt them.

 

A few people are acusing me of a personality transplant.

I dont understand, im being me, not faking?

 

Am I really that bad, that you want me dead?

 

Author's Note

For the past couple of months, random strangers, but also people I once called friends, have been imboxing me, death threats, anything, you name it. I blcoked these people, although now they are creating different accounts, it never ends. I dont see why, nor do i believe i have done anything wrong? All I ask is that we can have a grown up conversation about this, and stop with the death threats.

Reviews

[Annabelle Lee]

some of these words that did rhyme seemed a forced.

[Rahul]

Very painful write. I couldn't know what you wrote but your author;s note showed me what you've dropped. I knew wht you exactly want to say. yeah, i can understand such kinda people's don't get their work to do and do such kinda things when they feel free from time. It even happens sometime to me but not in that manner what you'd said.
i could know that this's a site not to date women's, but this's site to increase your english skills. I've even joined this site i think it's 2 week's ago and you know i think when we make some talks.
this's your inner feelings towards other what you felt about them, but what i think is, you should have to give them one chance...only and only one chance to improve their faults if you're in touch of them...because no one can know till the other one doesn't know what he did.
it's nice you've blocked them alll, but did you ever think if you block them once then they could make new ac/'s as you mentioned and could disturb you again. Don't you think ?
i said because i've seen that here on this site there's alots of fake a/c's and some person's're usin' this site for chating purposed, yeah, i agree that this could be a chating site but if both person's want to do with sensible chat. Your this writing showed me your feelings, painful feelings.

thanks for sharing such kinda beautiful piece with me, keep posting your stuffs, i loved your sworking way. Thanks for sharing and give them one chance to improve what they did & if they don't want to improve and disturb you again and again then just "kick on their assssss'ssss", then they'll surely know what they did and what they shouldn't have to done.

[Baby Ricochet]

Death threats?Oh hell no.

[The Bass Player]

Sadly, it is more than just death threats

[Calibaster]

You aren't bad! You're great! So is this poem! ;)

[Shivam Murari]

I really like how this poem discusses the problem of being yourself so effectively. We read so many poems and stories that tell us to be ourselves, but when we try to be ourselves, people around can't really tolerate it. Good work Shadey.

one piece of advice. This line sounds a bit vague, you might consider changing it:
"I dont know the one who which me dead"