When the rain comes

When the rain comes

A Poem by Jacqueline Murray
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15 February 2015

"
We march ourselves to the edges of the sidewalks,
like tiny automatons without the autonomy
given to non-scrap metal items--
(men, I guess--)
wishing to be wheeled;

wishing we wouldn't have to
wet our shoes in the
shallow puddles between the concrete and the blacktop
Curb

your dog,
Curb your enthusiasm,
"Be mindful of the gap between the train and the platform" but
please don't mind the gap between the curb and the
crosswalk.

I've noticed while skinny-dipping just how
difficult it is to clap underwater, and how easy it is
to lift people ordinarily heavy on earth.


The impact of the water cushions the potential
impact of the cement when we jump in knees-first,
and the cement cradles our feet before the
potential overflow can 
drown our lungs.

Unless you are a child or inordinately small adult.
(In which case we have an understanding, you and I.)

I've never skinny-dipped before but I had a 
lucid dream about it once.

© 2015 Jacqueline Murray


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I 'm too organized to ever be a proper poet ( in this usage for "organized" read: anal, boxed in, strictly linear). This does not mean I can't appreciate the real thing. Such appreciation possibly only on the same level that survivors harbor misty memories of long lost loves or the recently blind recall the color blue.

So my appreciation is really a small thing but small things are real too. Thank you for sharing this, pardon and pity me for only now responding.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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I have skinny dipped and you are not missing out. I guess it depends on where you skinny dip and who with. For us men it usually isn't in our best interests because of temperature of the water. As for your work and this particular peice, it is a damn shame it took this long to be able to read it. It is a flower with the petals falling off in a slow cadence. My highest praise to you. CD

Posted 9 Years Ago


I 'm too organized to ever be a proper poet ( in this usage for "organized" read: anal, boxed in, strictly linear). This does not mean I can't appreciate the real thing. Such appreciation possibly only on the same level that survivors harbor misty memories of long lost loves or the recently blind recall the color blue.

So my appreciation is really a small thing but small things are real too. Thank you for sharing this, pardon and pity me for only now responding.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Jacqueline Murray
Jacqueline Murray

Manhattan, NY



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