Writer's Block

Writer's Block

A Poem by Jaclyn

I find it strange,

Peculiar
That a deadened, empty mind
Persists in echoing volatile protest

LET ME OUT! LET ME OUT!!

A brilliant intellect
Painted over
Bright beauty blanketed by
Dull hue.

© 2008 Jaclyn


Author's Note

Jaclyn
Don't know exactly what I was trying for...

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I appreciated this poem--sometimes, it's those moments when we feel we have nothing to say when interesting things come out. I like the rhythm of the line, "persists in echoing volatile protest."


Posted 16 Years Ago


When you hit the wall, words just come flowing out in an erratic flow. You did good considering. Rain..

Posted 17 Years Ago


yeah...i have been and i am there right now but I look at it this way: sometimes it might just be a necessary step in the writing/creativity process...it might just be that it is not ready to come out; thus the incubation of an idea or ideas not yet complete. Just go with the flow... you never know what might come out of it!

Great poem though! :)

Posted 17 Years Ago



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