The Pepple That Could Float On Water

really tired and just wanted to write a little poem

Look in my eyes

Who am I now

Hold up the skies

You're the only one

Who knows how

And I lie
Lie to myself

Cause I'm not you

And I wish I was

Holding me back

Falter the track

You're the only one

And I know it

Jigsaw puzzle jaw

Paper thin rhymes

Clip my claws

Sing this song

Strangers fall in love

You're the only one

And my heart is raising faster

We try so hard

To be alone

That we forget

I dont need a cure

Cause your my disease

Like a flashing lure

You pull me to the reef

Sacred dreaming

Are you dreaming of me?

I'm terrified if so

Cause im made up of  disasters

Believe me I cant feel a thing

Thinking of believing in me

You're the only one

Reviews

[black_rose_obsession]

Your an empathy writer and here I feel broken or in the process of being reformed intimacy, makes me wonder about the person you wrote this for. This reminded me of my X. Teeplys! that's a bad thought for me. Anyway's it's an amazing write! So, keep up the good work!

[Naomi Montana Walsh]

Cause im made up of disasters

Believe me I cant feel a thing

I like this line..I have heard this line from someone.. brought back a deep memory..this poem is great it has the heart of a living creature beating in it..you know sometimes a poem is just words and sometimes it lives.. I really like it

[Reika]

=)...? I have more to say than I can think of at the moment.

edit: I think I wrote more of a review of it in the reply on myspace than I did here... haha