Note To Self: Pas De Chance

Pfft i've got 50 down on 30 up

Do you here the ocean breathing

Rustling the grains of sand

reaping the souls that stand

 

 

Walk with me

will you please

Please jump in the water

crawl to the land

Shift the dust, to express its lust

rusting your face or all six

But I know I'm dirty like the

addict with the needles

clawing at the crack

On the the door        trying to make it bleed

Strip it off the hinge  pull me to my feet

beat me down an inch

It's somethin I can not hide

These days aint empty more

like every thing all at once

Not even twenty-one

But your life is singin in these bottles

But your time is slippen in these

Trien to be the girl that saves

Whisperin my name with tears in yo eyes

These pictures seamingly stand still

With a hand i clutched tight to those thoughts of mine

When I sleep I dream of

of creapin up on my pills

till they fear me

All is well the robots in my arms

Bring me peace   when after we fight

Just to hold hands

A fight over lost dinner plans

never go according too

But thats okay, Kay is for

Kiss, Kiss the loudspeaker show

me when I reap her. She got me

droned up, so she can say i need

to be saved " Look, Look how bad this

young man is fucked"   That aint true

casue my savior speaks to me throught those drugs

The ones you got me hooked on the brighter

side All of this is thrue believe me I lied

awake for six whole days  I listen to

her pray for forgivness but theres

no responce on gods phone (maybe you should

ask nicer or leave your name an number) The

recording gently chimmers like strangers

who state love but mark a question mark

at the end of it sitten thru sips of

unstabble enviroments  that I never

should have spoken to that dealer cause

every thing you be sellin me is selling your

spot in the noose News brodcast over interupted

channels to bring words when you fell

and hit my veins pumpin ya ha 8 9 is

the reason I left you for heroine despite all

its harm it doesn't Knock me out like

the way you do...

Author's Note

okay this is meant to be read fast clearly and out loud
try it
it will sound much better
oh and the poem i was after today was one of jumbies#1fan's poems
and im now on a mission to find the next poem to attack
any suggestions
I think im going to go after the really popular people on my friends list
that good yeah

Reviews

[UpComesDown]

Hey you should try one of my poems!

[jumbie's #1 fan]

so this is what i've interpreted so far
- i have 6 faces (if that's true, then im happy with all 6)
-that i try to be the girl that saves (yeah, i'm over that)
-something about reconciliation after we fought (isn't that where we are now?)
-i had you rely off others so i could save you (purely out of just wanting to help, god forbid i care)
-i never said you were fucked. (i'm much nicer than that)
- i dunno what drugs i got you hooked on...didn't really make sense
-you've listened to me pray? (what a creeper)
-and how do i knock you out? (am i really that bad?)

[jumbie's #1 fan]

hey which one is this referring to?