You're So Uninspiring.

You're So Uninspiring.

A Poem by Jacky Bones
"

that i disappear

"

 You're so uninspiring.

That you inspire me.

To aspire.

To expire.

To retire.

To my little empire.

Were I talk in C-minor.

Just like a little prayer.

On its way.

Losing its little change every day.

It doesn't matter what you say.

A look of lust.

A book of dust.

A fountain of trust.

A mountain of rust.

Can you forgive me dear?

Its to late to kiss the mirror.

I'm I being clear?

Its to late to hold or kiss you.

Burn the shadows down.

Like boys with toy airplanes.

Children pointing and laughing.

Skeleton hands clapping.

A simple relapsing.

Thats over lapping.

A disconnected connection.

A reclamation.

Implicit Differentiation.

Promises promised to me.

I'm not who you should be.

I learned what I didn't learn.

I know that I don't know.

But how?

Why now.

The sun chases the moon.

As I run after you.

A ship to the see.

As I to the t.v.

I think I think I thought,

Of you.

Chasing me as the moon.

Or was it me chasing you?

Nothings new.

Reflecting reflections in glasses.

In the masses.

Honey you stop believing.

While I was reveling.

Myself to me.

You don't need to understand me to understand.

I stand under.

And ready.

You're so unbelievable.

That I pull

My teeth from the curb.

I am the first.

To be taken by the bird.

It brings me to loneliness.

Where I find cleanliness,

Or sorrow.

Please don't follow.

I find it safe alone.

I made it home.

© 2008 Jacky Bones


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hm...hm...hm...I'm thinking of words that are even close to good enough to even describe your work...I've read some of you poems and you capture randomness to bring a sort of happiness...but..you,some how..i dont know you, but you seem like your...in...pain..like your hurt about something, but putting on a smile cause that's what people 'prefer'..on the other hand it's probably me being weird as usual...im gunna go cower in a corner and contemplate what a retard i am now lol...good seems like too dull of a word to describe this

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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hm...hm...hm...I'm thinking of words that are even close to good enough to even describe your work...I've read some of you poems and you capture randomness to bring a sort of happiness...but..you,some how..i dont know you, but you seem like your...in...pain..like your hurt about something, but putting on a smile cause that's what people 'prefer'..on the other hand it's probably me being weird as usual...im gunna go cower in a corner and contemplate what a retard i am now lol...good seems like too dull of a word to describe this

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i can really appreciate this poem. i really like the word play. very interesting. never a dull moment.

Posted 15 Years Ago


I'm happy I was being a retard last night and didn't click the link.
because it built up my anticipation, and it was worth the wait. (For my internet was also being retarded and not cooperating with me until just a little while ago) >.<
I looooves it. :D
I especially love reading it out loud!
(because I'm the kind of dork who reads poems out loud...>.< yeah..)
Meeeeeps, this is cool. Meow.


Posted 16 Years Ago


oooh, i like this one. gosh harry, you're so talented

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Jacky Bones
Jacky Bones

Holloween Town, HI



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