A Parodox About The Most Perfect Love Song In All The World

A Parodox About The Most Perfect Love Song In All The World

A Poem by Jacky Bones
"

The best one ever

"

I'm going to write the most perfect love song,

In all the world.

Listen to my words while I strum along.

It will be about the most amazing girl.

I'll use amazing metephores to describe my love.

Like how my heart is now a dove.

And how it flies in your eyes above.

My voice will sound so sweet.

When I sing the line "You knocked me right off my feet".

 

And every single girl.

Will be so green.

When they hear me say "when I say you, you put my head in a swirl".

You know what I mean?

And every single guy.

Will lie.

And take this song.

And say it is their song.

They will sing it to the one they love.

But when he gets to the line about doves.

My voice will come out from the radio.

Then she will know.

 

Near the middle I'll sing it really slow.

Just so you know.

That these are the lines that are really important.

And you wont forget it.

I'll carry on a note.

Or maybe I wont.

What ever sounds best.

Then I'll put my hand to my chest.

And the guitare will pick up.

and for a moment I'll shut up.

 

I do a chorus line.

With puns about time.

Or "now I'm fine".

"I'm so happy you are mine".

Sing that a few times.

 

This is the part where I scream.

Only playing one string.

And go back into the chorus.

It will make it feel like its only the two of us.

 

I'll end it a little bit after.

Maybe some nervouse laughter.

I'll lean in and we will kiss.

We will proble miss.

But thats okay.

We're okay.

I'll sing it to you again another day.

 

© 2008 Jacky Bones


Author's Note

Jacky Bones
uh i had it better in my head
but after a day without something to write it down on
this is what i came out to be.

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aww, this is so sweet, gosh harry, you're such a romantic lol

Posted 16 Years Ago


I actually really love this! Good job. Although I noticed a few spelling errors, the poem itself was wonderful. :)

Posted 16 Years Ago



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