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A Poem by Jackson Krauss Blind Painter

Hint fiction of 28 words

In the second before his last,

Jonathan finally believed his own lies.

He thought,

a foot above the ground,

'love really lasts forever,’

and ‘I really can fly’.

© 2012 Jackson Krauss Blind Painter

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Marie Anzalone

"Equivocal" :-)

You are so gifted you call tell the whole story in just a few sparse words. We all know where this is going, but I love how you left us hanging suspended in that moment of belief.

Please do not ever give up on your art.

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Jackson Krauss Blind Painter

Albuquerque, NM

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