You're My Addiction, Be My Medication?

You're My Addiction, Be My Medication?

A Poem by Jackie Mckeen

It started with a pain in my heart
Feeling the separation of us being apart
An addiction nothing else could fill
leaning over all I do is get ill

You probably don't care and thats ok
cause our future is nothing but grey
It's another storm that leaves its mess
All it has caused me is useless stress

All I want is you, that medication
Its all I can't have causing this frustration
The pain is sharp, the pain is slow
No matter what I do, it will grow

Pushing it away, making it so hard
My heart is on fire, but you leave it charred
Lying to myself saying I dont need you
Yet its your thoughts that get me through

I never told you I loved you cause its confusing
All I want to know, is the path you're choosing
I'll go on either way, so dont stand back
Nothing worse can happen, the world is already black






 

© 2008 Jackie Mckeen


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I think this was an awesome poem. I know that it is very hard in trying to figure out a person these days; you really dont know if they are good or bad inside. It's very hard to tell. Seems like the other person who really loves them has to experience life with that other person to find out if they are right for them or not, and God forbid, even if it means at the cost of getting their heart broken in the process. This really has so many emotions in it (hope i said all that right lol). It was really well written. And thanx for the awesome review ya gave me, too :)

B.A.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on August 25, 2008

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Jackie Mckeen
Jackie Mckeen

Greenville, SC



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My name Is Jackie Mckeen and I am a lyricist as well as a published poet of 8 years. I enjoy writing and most of my work is based on real life stories that I have experienced/read about or seen. more..

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