I Am....Me!

I am young and still growing
I am smart but not all knowing
I am nice, but sometimes a jerk
I am not lazy but at times don’t want to work

 

I am talented yet sometimes I waste it all
I am strong and know where I stand yet sometimes I fall
I have friends but sometimes I enjoy being alone
I don’t usually get into trouble, but sometimes I cross the no way zone

 

I have many faults; yeah I admit that they are there
But don’t laugh at me, cause you know its not rare
I’m in working progress to become the person I want to be
I’m sorry if I hurt you, I hope you understand and see
 

Reviews

[John Stussy]

Good job, and though you have your flaws you're obviously not a bad person. Great personal poem.

[The Mad Prophet]

Wow, very good. You expressedyourself well, and you admit you even have faults. To embrace them makes a person. To find yourself, you have to carve yourself, highlight yourself, and even adventure into the unknown for best results.

[Dashiell]

I love your poem! It shows how you are a great person but have the faults of any other human being. Good work!