![]() BerzerkA Poem by Jackie![]() So much in my mind... So much to express on the inside.. In my brain, so chaotic and untamed![]() Constructing the perfect line quite often takes it's time. Especially if it rhymes and sounds the same. It's a lot of power coming from the brain. It can be a real pain siphoning an immense amount of energy It can drive a man insane. It could even take days Sometimes even months. Even i have peices that have taken me years. It can be a pain So much goes on inside my brain It's so chaotic and untamed I have so many thoughts And yet so much that is still being brought to my attention. So much tension So much caught which lurks. And did i mention i still have unfinished work. Everything seems fine On the outside, but inside I'm going berserk. But than, to put them in words. There is so much that i wish Could be heard. It's almost absurd to have all these thoughts. Though i have fought used up a whole lot of energy And brain power which has taken me an hour so far. In some case more In some cases days, weeks even months. Sometimes it feels like a chore. It can be so exausting to the core. So much can be stored. Many thoughts i can't ignore. The trick is how they are expressed. I confess, when i describe with each and every line When i try to find the perfect rhyme When there so much floating around in my mind It can be a pain. Can drive a man insane It's so chaotic and untamed I have so many thoughts And yet so much that is still being brought to my attention. So much tension So much caught which lurks. I seem fine on the outside. But inside I'm going berzerk Nov 7th, 2017 Jackie gunnin
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StatsAuthor![]() JackieEau claire, WIAboutHello folks I'm 27 Love all music, hardcore gamer, and avid writer. Been writing since I was 15. although feel I've most definitely started a whole new story. Older wiser and and mostly every thing I .. more..Writing
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