Some reason

I have grown sick of all the hate

Always some reason for you to berate

Over religion, your decision or race

Your opinion in this dominion is laced

All of You're ignorance is a disease

You are all hypocrites. Truly filthy

I am so sick of it. Don't you 

see

Tired, truely of all your reasons

Everytime i have something to believe in

It is overcome by your man made scheming

I would close my eyes if i knew

I wouldn't have to open them again

Because there lies a place where happiness begins

A place always peaceful where it never ends

I have grown sick of all the hate

Always some reason for you to berate

Over religion, your decision or race

Your opinion in this dominion is laced

You're damn right I'm effected

I can't just turn a blind eye

Your negligence and recklessness 

has intercepted with our way of life

You've stepped in and disrespected 

everything within your sight

I'm sick of it. Your ignorant, inconsiderate. 

A hypocrite who is content with your smite

I won't put up with it

It won't roll off without a fight

You know, i'm intolerant

Its only fuel for me to write

I have grown sick of all the hate

Always some reason for you to berate

Over religion, your decision or race

Your opinion in this dominion is laced

I have grown sick, utterly disgusted with your reasons

Everytime i have something to believe in

It is overcome by your man made scheming

All of your breathing, the lives your decieving

I'm not dreaming. But believe me, if i was...

i wouldn't want to open my eyes again

Because there lies a place where happiness begins

A place always peaceful were it never ends

I have grown sick of all the hate

Always some reason for you to berate

Over religion, your decision or race

Your opinion in this dominion is laced

May 12th oct 21st, 2017

Jackie Gunnin

Author's Note

Something i started mid this year and finished about a week ago. Hope you like. I do appreciate all comments of all forms long or short. Detailed or brief. It is much appreciated

Reviews

[DiskartetHaraya]

Short nit-picky comment: Spelling Nazi-ing second "truly".

Words, or a string of words ending with a word ending with -ed always sound haunting. Add words that sound like "minion," or even near-highfalutin words like "dominion" and you realize it all sounds like a cult congregation... which sounds like "occult congregation" which is a terrible but apt pun since uniformity of opinion does resemble uniformity of robes. Repetition equally haunting.

Favorite contrast-filled lines: "I can't just turn a blind eye / Your negligence...".

[Jackie]

Thanks for stopping by

[apennylate]

Swoosh, you were not lying when you said you enjoyed rhyming, mate... Really nailed it home here, the swoops and curves of this meter left for an easy, enjoyable read... People will hate whatever is different, and within easy reach... It just is... Heh... Fantastic articulation of that frustration...

[ROXANE DORSEY]

Every one on earth is important, and very much needed for life to go on existing. I like the piece, your opinion is this dominion is laced. thanks for the nice share.