Empty

Your words are empty

Shallow and weak

My concern is ready

Attention is what i seek

Your will is unsteady

My defenses are bleak

Your words are empty

chaos it has caused to wreak

You reek. Smell of defeat

You allow this to take place

The expression on your face

It's empty. Your will... It is

Unsteady. Your forgetting

The importance. It's a pity

This discordance. S****y

How these orphans are getting

Enormous. But my concern...

It is ready. I'll not be forgetting

Pull the levy. I'll not be letting 

this not effect me. The example

You are setting. A generation

Of criminals I'm betting. These issues 

no longer seem minimal

The reality is unsettling

This is no usual phase

I'm disgusted by these ways

Your face is empty

Your words shallow and weak

Your will is unsteady

I am not ready

Am not forgetting

Oh, how unsettling

This has been getting

It's empty. Your will... It is

Unsteady. Your forgetting

The importance. It's a pity

This discordance. S****y

How these orphans are getting

Enormous. But my concern...

It is ready..

Sept 24th, 25th, 2017

Jackie Gunnin

Author's Note

Had a lot on my mind lately and i am surely thankful amd greatful i have this to turn to in such dire time of need. I appreciate all vies and comments. I will get to as many others as i can. Thanks also for your time.

Reviews

[apennylate]

Dayum, rhymes for days... A bleak and somewhat chaotic showmanship of discord... The tilting up and down style, delivered with gray phrasings and superb meter... Very well done... Ominously penned...

[Jackie]

Thank silente

[ROXANE DORSEY]

Sounds like you have a natural talent for the pen and poetry. thanks for sharing this lovely piece.

[Jackie]

I do. Been at it for many many years. And i still find so much pleasure in it. Even as we speak. Thanks for dropping by and checking these out. Means whole lot to me

[R.E.K.]

Wow, very intense. I felt those strong emotions in your writing.

[Jackie]

So i did well than... Well thanks for your time. And much appreciated

[wordman]

deep thoughts here my friend