Consumed

so blinded, so consumed by your gloom

How could you be so blinded by your hatred

Consumed by your anger. No stranger. face it

You're out for revenge, off of your meds. 

on a mad binge. No hope for amends. you've gone crazy

Don't care what it takes. Don't stand in her way

She's blinded by hatred. Consumed by her anger,

she no stranger. Controlled by emotion

A puppet to her pain, fueled by her own rage

with every string, it could make her do anything

She will go insane and destroy her target

manipulate and destroy everything a part of it

She is on a path of destruction. she cannot grasp 

A young one struggling to function. can't think

on the brink continuing to sink. So troubling

Over analyzing the thoughts are bubbling

How could you...... 

How could you be so blinded by your hatred

Consumed by your anger. No stranger, face it

You're thoughts are chaos, no concern 

for the mayhem it will cause. I wish you would stop

just pause. read into your flaws. . I wish you had empathy

pain, and regret. I wish you could sympathize, look me in the eyes

Look her in he face and apologize. i wish you could rise 

above this. But your a puppet. controlled by the emotions

No regret. No concern for the damage you inflict. out for revenge

off of your meds, on a mad binge. no time for amends, no time to

repent

07/15/2017

CJ Potts

Author's Note

I haven't read much, dont get around to it as often as i would like. any and all comments are appreciative. Please just stop by and atleast read and just leave something short and simple. anything positive or critical works for me

Reviews

[Tamika]

Wowww. I am so glad you sent me a read request for this and I am so glad I read it! This hit me like a tonne of bricks. "A puppet to her pain, fueled by her own rage" this line really spoke to me... I feel like this is what happens to me way too often. Well done on writing a poem that I can so painfully see my reflection in, it is as if I was meant to come across this, just to understand how controlled by my anger and sadness I am :( Thank you a million times over

[Jackie]

Reading and listening to songs can be soo helpful at times. And you are most welcome

[wordman]

was this intended to our a*s hole troll tk little

[Jackie]

No. It wasn't

[wordman]

well i will dedicate it to him..

[Jackie]

Who you talking bout though?