Sacred

Sacred

A Poem by Jackie
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About my time and how valuable and important it is to me

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If you can't make time for me. 
If you ain't trying to see 
how important. How valuable this minds for me 
than i ain't trying to leave mine to be 

wasted. Face it, if you can't rely 
on something sacred I'm not gonna 
let you take it. Ive already got so much 
of it tainted. Time after time that i had 
been aquainted. 

Involved with the wrong people. Equal 
a whole lot of evil. Deceitful. 
And a whole lot of energy i could have spent 
on trying to better me. But instead of me. 
I took a lot of heat. A lot you see, falling into me. 

Just made it hard to breathe, hard to believe. 
I couldnt see, couldnt hear my thoughts clearly 
cause there were a lot of folks who weren't
what they appear to be. I kept trying, but they 
kept denying me. So dont waste my time. Please believe. 
Understand me. My time ain't free. Show me 
that it means everything. like diamond rings. 

It aint cheap 
the price is steep 
can you keep this promise... Honest.. 
Show me that your on it. 

I'm in if you can
i'm in if you protect and defend
Shall we begin test these chances once again

June 29th, 2017

© 2017 Jackie


Author's Note

Jackie
I dont often get to reading others as i find it difficult to vet into most times. I am also really bad at leaving comments. I do try try putting a lot of effort in to it when i do.i will try to get to as many as i can. Anyhow please stop by and let me know what you think. I do appreciate whatever i can get...thanks again

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most of us go through this phase of life,but we quickly get back on track,,good message

Posted 7 Years Ago


I like the flow of your writing. Your rhyme schemes are on point. Time isn't cheap and the price is really steep that's for sure. I'm 27 myself and have wasted years and years of my life. It's becoming more precious as time goes on though. Thank you for sharing, it was good!

Posted 7 Years Ago



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