Savagery

My previous one fallacy. Except I changed it to savagery. also much more descriptive than the last. Personally think it flows superb. Though may have went excessive on the rhyming. my preference thoug

Where is our sanity? A stable mentality
In a reality where now seems like a fallacy
It's blasphemy. Such a catastrophe. The results
are damaging. Can't deal with all this savagery

Where is our common sense? our innocence?
I've taken so many paths And all I've come
across are dead ends. Ignorance. I'm ready
for deliverance. I feel So alone in this.
Like I'm the only One who's noticed. Well,
I'm the only one  who shows it. Exposes
how much truly i give a s**t.

Are we lost? can we take a moment
just to pause. Explore the possibilities?
Understand  the cause. Cause everybody
has abandon the laws. Self esteem. Flimsy
like we're made of straws. Yes we are imperfect
but we shouldn't live by our flaws.

I don't believe we've earned it.

We're so undeserving of this shot.

This chance is the ONLY one that we've got.
This evil. These things shouldn't even be legal.
We deceive you, leave and don't believe. I grieve
for the people. And god, the devil has sought
out for so much trouble It's gotten hot.
It's gotten scary all the hell he has brought

It has become such a mess.
We've been carressed With such distress
When will we confess? Give it a rest. A means
for an end. Grant us so hope, a reason to cope
we're down by a rope. I can feel it in my throat
Inhaling all this smoke. I proceed to choke
Smothered by these clouds. I wear it like a cloak
My feelings and emotions, they continue to soak
through. And if you only knew how eschew
How many times I've pointed it out to you. How out
of mind all of the signs. it's true, I've gone through
this again and again and again and you continue to
resist and defend. This is no heavensent. It's all an
illusion. Many times it has been proven. Common sense
has been diluted. You're so naïve and shallow. and it has
exuded. our traditions have been replaced with poor decisions
There is no exception. The entire section is a dire reflection
It's depressing. such a mess and got me stressing. confessing...

Wondering, pondering...

Where is our sanity? A stable mentality
In a reality where now seems like a fallacy
It's blasphemy. Such a catastrophe. The results
are damaging. Can't deal with all this savagery

June 26th, 2017

Jackie G

Author's Note

Please do share and comment. put a whole lot into this one

Reviews

[wordman]

that`s what life is about,decisions we make dictates the life we live