Unacceptable

Unacceptable

A Poem by Jackie
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Another. About todays hip hop. Just a hige slap in the face. A. Real mockery and a disgrace.

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How is this acceptable? 
Have to question intellectual. 
It's depressin. Hardly respectable. 
It's a mess and not representable. 
I Can not just let it go. Can't pretend
That I don't know. 

Is this some kind of joke? 
I can't help but choke
It ain't funny though
It's disrespectful
Unacceptable
Gotta check these hoes
Cause they all got to go

Can't have them run the show
Somebody bout' to get physical
Real sick, of these individuals
Act quick. It's pitiful, this ridicule

It ain't no joke
Make me wanna choke
It's disrespectful
Unacceptable
Gotta check these hoes
Cause they all got to go
 
These rap fools
Thinkin they cool
With they auto tune
The life they persuin
The game they ruin
I hope they time comin soon
Cause otherwise we doomed
Cause....

Of ain't no joke
Straight make me wanna choke
It's disrespectful
Unacceptable
Gotta check these hoes
Cause they all got to go

June 15th, 2017
Cj potts

© 2017 Jackie


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Jackie
Appreciate all readers as well as those who also leave comments. Thanks a bunch

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i can remember a time when the people was knocking rock and roll,it`s just an era that we don`t like but forced to listen

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