Fallacy

Not sure what to say or how to explain this one but sure you will understand

Where is our sanity? 

A stable mentality

In a reality where now, 

seems like a fallacy

Where is our common sense

our innocence? I've taken 

so many paths And all I've come 

across are dead ends

Are we lost? can we take a moment 

just to pause. Explore the possibilities? 

Understand the cause

It is such a mess. We've been 

carressed With such distress

When will we confess? 

Give it a rest

Own up. Grow up 

for our sake

Times are tough, 

a total heartbreak

So many roads, 

now closed. A waste...?

And So many troubles 

we've faced

We still do. 

Walking endlessly

Without a clue

What do we do?

When most stray 

from remaining true

Where do you go 

when you legit know

Everyone has become unknown. 

Where are the roots? 

Who are we? 

Who are you 

when you stray 

from being you

Cj potts

June 2nd, 2017

Author's Note

I truely appreciate all comments and constructive criticism.. Thanks for stoppi g by

Reviews

[Maria]

OK I saw fallacy and pardon my ignorant mind for some reason thought it had to do with the Fallopian tubes...hah,, but well, after reading and all came to the conclusion it was something else entirely...so job well done.

[Carol Cashes]

Well done. "Own up. Grow up" Preach, sister, Amen.

[Jackie]

Thanks all for the comments and also. I am a male.. Thanks for stopping by..:-)

[Carol Cashes]

Craaaap! I totally gender-profiled you. I was on my cell phone and couldn't see the pic clearly, could just make out baby's head. The poem's tone had the fed-up-mother-who-rants-on-facebook tone I had just watched on facebook earlier. I'm really sorry, and knowing you're a young father makes the piece even more profound. Again, I'm so sorry, should not have assumed gender and you taught me a valuable lesson.

[Jackie]

Np. And i am grateful incould do such a thing. :-)

[Hbrook]

Wow. This is really good, and got deep really fast. I really enjoyed it :)

[Jackie]

Thank you for stopping by reading and also commenting your thoughts