Cannot Believe

Cannot Believe

A Poem by Jackie
"

Cannot believe, cannot perceive an alternate scene

"
I cannot believe
what my eyes have seen
I cannot believe
what my mind conceived

I cannot believe, cannot perceive
an alternate scene
I see what i see.
Even if or when you disagree.

I cannot believe anything you relieve
I cannot believe
what my eyes have seen
I cannot believe
what my mind has concieved
I cannot. i cannot perceive
An alternate scene

I cannot see, i cannot believe
all that I have retrieved
I cannot believe

the responses I have recieved
I cannot believe, cannot perceive
an alternate scene


Jackie Gunnin
May 1st, May 2nd, 017

© 2017 Jackie


Author's Note

Jackie
on a roll. hope ya'll enjoy

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My political views i suppose. And also recently been trying to remain insoired. It usally political pr personal stuff i write. But recently mostly politics

Posted 7 Years Ago


Hi Jackie,
This is really interesting! I really like the repetition and the ambiguity. Was this inspired by something in particular?

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on May 2, 2017
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Tags: political, society

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