Shameful

Shameful

A Poem by Jackie
"

We are so unstable. We have thrown our halo

"
Why so hateful
It's so distasteful
We enable and
it's shameful
Its no fable
we are so unstable
We have thrown our halo

It's not okay though
We continue descending below
no longer defending our home

It's so hateful
so distasteful
we enable and
it's shameful
It's no fable
we remain low
it's so insane though
It's so bane. We're so vain. No!

Though The path. The path is shown
we proceed into the unknown
In disbelief, unrelieved. We reep what we sow

It's so hateful
So distasteful
We enable and
it's shameful
It's no fable
We're so ungrateful
and it's so painful

We descend below
No longer defend our home
Continue drifting from what's rightly known

We Remain alone
Maintain into the unknown
Insane we are though
We are bane. So vain. No!
Our brains we don't retain. We slow

And it's so. It's so hateful
so disgraceful and distasteful
We enable and it's shameful
We are unstable. We have thrown our halo


Jackie Gunnin
Feb 16th, 2017

© 2017 Jackie


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Jackie
Appreciate all viewers and all commentors who stop by and take the time to read my pieces:-)

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"we remain low
it's so insane though
It's so bane. We're so vain. No!

Though The path. The path is shown
we proceed into the unknown
In disbelief, unrelieved. We reep what we sow.

Descriptive depiction of our human ways, we surely are vain indeed. This is a masterful piece. Wonderful work!


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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"we remain low
it's so insane though
It's so bane. We're so vain. No!

Though The path. The path is shown
we proceed into the unknown
In disbelief, unrelieved. We reep what we sow.

Descriptive depiction of our human ways, we surely are vain indeed. This is a masterful piece. Wonderful work!


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

reads like a song jackie !

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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