Defeated

Defeated

A Poem by Jackie
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I feel so. I feel so defeated

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Hate the way I'm treated
Left feeling defeated
I can't speak it, I feel heated

The feel, I can't conceal
It's so real, it is a big deal
Yes' I heal but now I kneel
I give my attention. My mind 
Is a detention. I give you
My attention and you steal.
The way you react. It kills

I hate the way I'm treated 
Left feeling defeated
I can't speak it, I'm so. I'm so heated

I try to explain. Sometimes the information 
is hard to retain. Their is so much. So much 
to obtain. And my mind it proceeds 
to go insane.You drive me. You drive me 
insane. Leave me with flame. A feeling 
of disdain. Another reason to complain

I hate the way I'm treated
Left feeling defeated
I can't speak it I feel so. I feel so heated

Why do you relieve it. Why.. Why
Must I receive it. I don't need it
I don't need it. I'm so heated. 
They way that I am treated. 
The way You make me feel. 
It so real. It is a big deal. 
How you make me feel defeated. 
I feel so defeated



Jackie Gunnin
January 11th, 2016

© 2017 Jackie


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mum
this is pretty amazing and so full of passion ... I could hear someone screaming this from the top of their lungs! good work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Jackie

8 Years Ago

thanks mum

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