Kill Yourself

Kill Yourself

A Poem by Jackie
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disconnect from everyone else(ps. I do not or am not promoting or advertising suicide. don't do it. just some dark sick s**t I wrote)

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If your mind is broke
If it's an endless slope
If you lost all hope
If all you do is choke
Regurgitate and gloat

Just Kill yourself
Eliminate your health
Disconnect from everyone else
And kill yourself

If all you taste is bitter
You just continue to wither
Your drowning, not a swimmer
If your patience getting thinner
If there is nothing else to consider

Just kill yourself
Eliminate your health
Disconnect from everyone else
And kill yourself

If your stuck in the rain
If all you feel is excruciating
Feel like your flushed down the drain
You feel empty. Want to wash it all away
Its Driving you insane, no longer want to stay

Just kill yourself
Eliminate your health
Disconnect from everyone else
And kill your self

Kill your self
Let yourself go
Slip from everyone else
Kill yourself
Kill yourself



Jackie Gunnin
January 4th, 2017

© 2017 Jackie


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When the Bloodhound Gang did a song about this topic it was good because it was funny.

This is just rambling emo clichés with no self awareness, I figured you were a teenager but... sadly you claim to be an adult. Better luck next time because this was not successful, unless you like pandering click bait-y emo drivel.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jackie

8 Years Ago

An opinion is an opinion. No hard feelings. As I said I don't premote or advertise it. Justvsomethin.. read more



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When the Bloodhound Gang did a song about this topic it was good because it was funny.

This is just rambling emo clichés with no self awareness, I figured you were a teenager but... sadly you claim to be an adult. Better luck next time because this was not successful, unless you like pandering click bait-y emo drivel.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jackie

8 Years Ago

An opinion is an opinion. No hard feelings. As I said I don't premote or advertise it. Justvsomethin.. read more

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Eau claire, WI



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