Fear

Fear

A Poem by Jackie
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It's fight or flight.pushing through.falling at a greater height

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I can't move. I got so much,
so much to prove. It's true
But I also got a lot to lose
Though I got so much to do.
I can't move. I can't get caught up
in the groove.

It's sink or swim
I cant go out on a whim.
I can't jump. To reach for the rim.

I barely survive
pushing through
to make it out alive
It's a rough life
Jumping could be suicide
It's fight or flight Pushing through
Falling at greater height

I know what I should do
but I can't I can't move
it is easier do

What i do best.
But I must confess.
Paralyzed by the outcome.
rejection or success


Jackie gunnin
November 25th, 2016

© 2017 Jackie


Author's Note

Jackie
Something I wrote recently about myself.

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We all have fears of the unknown. I'm sure many can relate to this.

Posted 8 Years Ago


The confusion.. The fear.. One feels overwhelmed when these situations strike.. You convey what most of us quite often feel.. Good work!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jackie

8 Years Ago

Thanks for taking your time to read and comment
Dr. YumnaKay

8 Years Ago

You are welcome! It was a pleasure :)

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