Redeem

Redeem

A Poem by Jackie
"

Love, respect. Redeem me of what's left

"
Give me peace
Give me equality
Give me relief
Give me....

Love
Respect
Redeem me
Of what's left

Give me hope
Relieve this rope
In which I choke
Give me

The power
The ability
The strength
To set us free

Give me peace
Give me equality
Give me relief
Give me

Love
Respect
Redeem me
Of what's left


November 11th
Copyright 2016

© 2016 Jackie


Author's Note

Jackie
Was originally called "give me" but now shooting for "redeem" tell me what y'all think. Thanks and very much appreciated.

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Jackie
Jackie

Eau claire, WI



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