I Surrender

So this here is my cry for help. 4 hours before election. My honesty, my heart and soul is put into this. And with all honesty I am scared shitless.

We need you
Now more than ever
I need you
To bring us back together
I need you
So I surrender

I need your guidance
I'm reaching for your highness
Bring us peace. Tranquil the violence
Make it seize. Provide us with silence

I'm begging please
Down on my knees
Put us. Put us at ease

We need you
Now more than ever
I need you
To bring us back together
I need you
So o surrender

Rid us of this sickness
Of all things tainted and malicious
How much more must I witness
How much more of this wickedness

How much more
My heart is pure
How much must I endure

We need you
We need you
Now more than ever
I need you
I need you
To save us from these endeavors
I need you
So I surrender, I surrender.


November 7th
Copyright: 2016

Author's Note

My cry for help. Please comment, critique etc etc. Thanks so much for your time

Reviews

[Emosawa]

I understand how you feel, though I think it would be a little more descriptive to say "We all need you" unless you were trying to make a point of saying that you were the only one for your side. Also I like the descriptive words "Malice, Wickedness, Surrender and Tranquil. Finally I really like how you didn't focus on one side. You were addressing both sides, and I like how you stated "Bring us peace. Tranquil the violence." You just wanted peace and I liked how you wrote it.

[Jackie]

Some of us yes. But honestly dont feel like everybody deserves it. Just me though. I say yes cause I feel like most people this day seem to turn to violence. Turn a blind eye and b***h and moan. Just me though. I know we not ALL that way. But a lot of us are. And I have trouble finding people who I can call family and talk to cause seems most the masses are blind and want to do it all wrong and alone.. See I write a lot about politics and monown personal issues in experience s ibhave had. But recentlybhave been also writing about unity love andpeace respect etc. I miss that. I beg for it it cause I tired of seeing my brothers and sisters fighting over stupid selfish irrelevent things. But anyway I got carried away. If your interested please do read more. You'll learn more about me through my poetry and lyrics than you will from me personally though. Thank you for your time and hope to see your tag again soon. :-)

[Jackie]

I speak for unification. Yes I meant me. But I also try my best to acknowledge all people. Try to guide and bring everybody back together. Thanks again

[Emosawa]

No, thank you

[Jackie]

Redeem is another one where I say me a lot but simply cause I wish to gain "the ability, the strength to bring us all together again"