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A Poem by Jackie
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How shall my story begin

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What lies inside
What thrives
and comes alive

What hides from within
How shall the story begin

How shall I start
There must be something
Weighing on my heart

Or in the back of my mind
Buried deep, what can i find

Where shall I look
In this open book
Where do I look

What lies inside
What thrives
And comes alive

What hide from within
How shall my story begin



November 3rd, 2016

© 2016 Jackie


Author's Note

Jackie
How I've been feeling last few days. I actually honestly get frustrated when I want to write by feel as if there is nothing or can't find or think of anything to write about

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A nice depiction of having the desire to write but not being sure where to start, I like how this flows as though it were a thought process. This could also be taken as someone at a crossroad, unsure where they should go with their life. I've had points in time where writer's block kept me away for awhile. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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A nice depiction of having the desire to write but not being sure where to start, I like how this flows as though it were a thought process. This could also be taken as someone at a crossroad, unsure where they should go with their life. I've had points in time where writer's block kept me away for awhile. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thank you all for your comments and time. I really do appreciate it. For me I love all kinds of music. Well all except polka and opera. But anyways in mostly all cases I am listening to music. Always lookin for ways to be inspired or something ANYTHING to be thought provoking. Also if y'all could check out my others as well i would be really quite grateful. Thank you again for all of you time. Very much appreciated.:-)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Definitely relatable! I only write occasionally as a hobby, but there are times when I'm in the mood for writing and words just don't come.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jackie

8 Years Ago

Thank you paradigm
I find myself having writers block many times throughout the day. Music really helps me, I don't know what music interest you but I love to listen to "MrSuicideSheep" on Youtube!

https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC5nc_ZtjKW1htCVZVRxlQAQ

Check out my last post?

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jackie

8 Years Ago

Thank you zach

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Jackie

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Hello folks I'm 27 Love all music, hardcore gamer, and avid writer. Been writing since I was 15. although feel I've most definitely started a whole new story. Older wiser and and mostly every thing I .. more..

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