Turn it off(original)

Turn it off(original)

A Poem by Jackie
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I must admit. This one I do find to be quite painful to read just simply because it is so repetitive. Go ahead and check it out at your own risk.

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I wish
I wish I
I wish I could
I wish I could turn it off

I wish
I wish I
I wish I could
I wish I could blindly stare

I only
I only wish
I only wish you
I only wish you thought I cared

I only
I only wish
I only wish I
I only wish I could stop

I only
I only wish
I only wish you
I only wish you thought

I only wish
I only wish I
I only wish I could
I only wish I could turn it off

I only
I only wish
I only wish I
I only wish i could blindly stare

I only
I only wish
I only wish I
I only wish I didn't care

I only
I only wish
I only wish I
I only wish I didn't care


Oct 18th, 2016(earlier this morning)

© 2016 Jackie


Author's Note

Jackie
Please do check them out. And comment, critique. Express what you yhink and how you feel about each. Please and thank you:)

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well jackie it seems you are a song writer !

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jackie

8 Years Ago

Yesss... More now than I was previously. Did you actually read this fully. I mean reason I ask is ca.. read more
 wordman

8 Years Ago

most of today's songs are exactly that ! i don`t like a lot of them,but who cares right !
yes.. read more

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Jackie
Jackie

Eau claire, WI



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