Over thinking

Its breaking me apart. Putting holes in my heart, in my happiness. An ever growing feeling of emptiness

I feel like I'm sinking
This thing
called over thinking
So I start drinking

In hopes To cope
This rope, my throat
I choke. Continue to soak

Drown it all out
Anxiety & doubt
And all its about

it killing me some days.
I just can't seem to escape
I just cant seem get away

Its all so overwhelming
A feeling so overtaking.
I feel like it's breaking

Breaking me apart. Putting holes
in my heart, in my happiness.
An ever growing emptiness

Spreading through my soul
Embedding black like coal
Dissecting and leaving holes

It can be so overtaking
I tend to feel that its breaking
Breaking me apart

Leaving holes in my heart
In my soul, my happiness
With an ever growing emptiness



Sept 5th, 2016

Author's Note

Sept 5th, 2016

Reviews

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Awesome.......
i almost tried to rap the alliterations.........
overthinking does take hold of us and then leave us senseless and violated........
we know it is bad but rarely can escape it.......
you have perfectly captured it.......

the flow it flawless......
great job!!!
i loved it!!!
:)