Hypocrite

Hypocrite

A Poem by Jackie
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What gives you notoriety. What makes you so unlike me???

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What gives you notoriety
What makes you so unlike me
To be belligerent when you fight me
What makes you so different
So different from me

Why is it okay for you
To be mean and so cruel
To say things untrue
How is it you can be rude
But its so wrong when I do

so willingly pass the dish
But get upset when I spit back
I'm so sick of it, your a hypocrite

tired of your lack of manners
Your ego, your double standards
Your no different, your no better
Your no better than me
We all hurt, we all bleed

You cannot be so cruel
Expect me not to come back at you
You are no different
You can not be belligerent
Expect me not to give a s**t

You cannot pass the dish
Than get upset when I spit back
I'm sick of it, your a hypocrite

I don't bother you
I don't tell lies about you
I don't slander you
hurt you, I'm never untrue
Though I'm sick of it, I'm driven to it

I don't deserve all this bullshit
I shouldn't be caught up in this mess
I shouldn't have to deal with all this
But you continue, you continue
To be so cruel, it's unacceptable

You willingly pass the dish
Get upset when I spit back
I'm done with it. Your a hypocrite




August 31st, 2016

© 2016 Jackie


Author's Note

Jackie
August 31st, 2016

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I like the rhythm of this. Very raw and relatable.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good underlining message. I definitely think this is relatable on many levels. Good flow as well.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jackie

8 Years Ago

Thank you nfyd for you honest critiquing. Hopefully youll take a peek at my others. Really much do a.. read more
like it, and definitely know the feeling, we're a linesteppin monkey. lot easier to pass a fist than be a pacifist :P

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jackie

8 Years Ago

Thank you for you time and words. Surely means a lot.

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