Raw Emotion

A face full of raw emotion. Notice with more than an notion. There is an ocean so cold, frozen

Raw emotion

Wasteful, distasteful, disgraceful.
A face full of raw emotion. Notice
with more than just a notion
There is an ocean so cold, frozen
Aggressively Closing. Progressively growing.
Severe symptoms showing. No way of knowing
when the lighting strikes or the thunder starts rolling
When the tide rises effectively overflowing.

March 15th, 2016

Author's Note

Started out with 3 words that rhyme. Anyway I was lookin through my file and decided to play with the words in this one you y'all like it...:)

Reviews

[Re-Pete]

Nice job. Great imagery. Well done.

[Leo]

It definitely resonated with me and hence took me seconds to read it and fathom..only because it read smoothly and beautifully with imagery and raw emotion..bravo!

[Jackie]

Thank you for your kind words