Angels & Demons

Angels & Demons

A Poem by Jackie
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Not sure whether to call this angels and demons or submit. Think I'll let the viewers decide which works best.

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Sometimes I have bad thoughts 
i sometimes would like to commit to 
But my heart love big 
so most times I have to submit too
 I cant help but think through
caught in the middle
Angels and demons. Searching for peace 
but these demons so deceiving
These thoughts that are conceiving
So mean and demeaning. 
These angels be relieving 
but I can feel the demons breathing 

I must submit. its so wrong, 
I cannot commit
I mustn't quit
I mustn't give in

The angels speak and keep me safe 
as the demons wreak and enslave
manipulate to teach hate
They attempt to fuel rage
condemn me to a cage 

 Some days I get so impatient
my mind it races
fires I'm facing
blood that I'm tasting
trouble is chasing
Though I mustn't embrace it  

I must submit
Its so wrong
I cannot commit.
I mustn't quit. 
I mustn't give in

Let the angels protect
heed warning of the effects. 
No need to be its next.
another defect, another subject 
Don't let them resurrect.

January 6th, 2016

© 2017 Jackie


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The angels and the demons are the ones who help in making us a better person everyday. A lovely Write this was. One must listen to the inner instinct and judge what is right and wrong. Well done! Keep it up :D

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7 Years Ago

I actually just titled this. It been sitting in here for few years. And thought this one sits well. .. read more

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Eau claire, WI



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