No More Excuses

No More Excuses

A Poem by Jackie
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We want to know the truth, we need too.

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I wanna know what the truth is.
before you tighten our nooses.
I wanna know what the truth is
no more excuses and lies.

You have fooled the masses
with your disguise
I am going to catachize
prow for answers.
You are a cancer killing us slowly
but surely one by one.

I sense your corruption
It's raising suspicion
I sense deceit left
by clumsy feet.
Bodies of data left in the open.
bodies laid up No longer going.

I wanna know the truth,
I've already seen the proof,
it lies before our eyes.
Open your mind before you speak.
Let the truth set you free.
Let it be your release

I will not be led to believe
when you create grief and catastrophe.
I will not be deceived
it's already hard to breathe
choking on your deceit
Your thoughtless defeat.



July 31st, 2015

© 2016 Jackie


Author's Note

Jackie
Please do critique. I sure does mean a whole lot to me. Looking for an audience, getting desperate. I been share on Facebook as well yet I really been hoping to get more views. It really does mean a whole lot to me. More than you know

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prow or prowl?

When the gut says it's too good to be true - it usually is. Too often one's truth depends on which side of the view you're on. Think road rage... a made up term for unreasoned anger over self-perceived slights... and a four year old dies.

I think I understand what you're getting at BUT the vagueness leaves too little to interpolate. Speak clear and take the heat if you have to - we have the freedom to express our thoughts and to have them disagreed with.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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